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What a sad story. The sad thing is that there is so much of that misfortune going around. Good job with it though.

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Feb 10Liked by Jim Latham

Get a job and get the hell out of there, kid.

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Feb 9Liked by Jim Latham

That was amazing! You inspire me to write. I saw monster and instantly thought of a kids story. I LOVE how you made it dark. It was like a sucker punch and I am here for that. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ You are really gifted!!

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Wow, Powerful and sad, yet hopeful.

It's amazing what you did with that prompt.

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thank you Penny, and I agree

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