Serialized short fiction
Intriguing. And I have to wait a week, probably to get intrigued again. Nice, Jim.
Very intriguing Jim. I'm in for part 2!
Oooooh, Jim! I have read this twice. I have NO idea what is going on here. BUT I LIKE IT! More, please!
I'm glad I changed my mind (because it's a 4 part story) and read Dina's Gospel, part 1 'til the end. I saved it until I receive part 2 next week. Thank you for the thrilling, suspenseful feeling, Jim. You're always a great writer. firstname.lastname@example.org Rudy Ferro