Oh no! We have to wait! From the very first sentence, I did not like this guy, Jim, and know he deserves whatever happens to him. That is a powerful first line. And I know from the ominous tone all the way through that something unwelcome is heading Josh's way. As he says, " It is too easy." A fine piece of fiction!
Love that you’re sending out a serialized story. Great stuff, Jim. I’m really enjoying it so far and can’t wait for part two. (And I’m excited to see karma catch up with Josh!)
Josh Gets Busted (1)
Oh no! We have to wait! From the very first sentence, I did not like this guy, Jim, and know he deserves whatever happens to him. That is a powerful first line. And I know from the ominous tone all the way through that something unwelcome is heading Josh's way. As he says, " It is too easy." A fine piece of fiction!
Josh is a skank!
Love that you’re sending out a serialized story. Great stuff, Jim. I’m really enjoying it so far and can’t wait for part two. (And I’m excited to see karma catch up with Josh!)