Short Story Part 1 of 3
Oh no! We have to wait! From the very first sentence, I did not like this guy, Jim, and know he deserves whatever happens to him. That is a powerful first line. And I know from the ominous tone all the way through that something unwelcome is heading Josh's way. As he says, " It is too easy." A fine piece of fiction!
Josh is a skank!
Love that you’re sending out a serialized story. Great stuff, Jim. I’m really enjoying it so far and can’t wait for part two. (And I’m excited to see karma catch up with Josh!)